The Maquis
(Star Trek - Deep Space Nine episode production code 440 & 441)
story by Rick Berman, Michael Piller, & Jeri Taylor
(the creators of the upcoming Star Trek Voyager)
with story help & teleplay by James Crocker on Part One,
and story help & teleplay by Ira Steven Behr on Part Two
Gene Roddenberry's vision for Star Trek as a future where
old petty conflicts have been laid to rest and an idyllic,
peaceful society is now status quo really gave writers a problem.
Without reliable conflicts, how could they create 52 riveting
episodes per year in this universe? Michael Piller in particular
seemed to be pushing to create cultural pockets within that universe
that would be ripe in spawning long-term conflicts without easy
answers. The creation of a border realignment between
Federation and Cardassian space was a logical extension of
the usual Deep Space Nine arena, which provided some material
for some final Next Generation episodes, while the rebel Maquis
elements would go on to fuel the make-up of "half" of the
crew on the new Voyager series.
It is too bad though, that so many of the tenets of Roddenberry's
world had to be forgotten, along with a sense of consistency
with what was going on, to continue this Maquis farce.
This story really begins with the
season seven Next Generation episode
"Journey's End",
and the treaty that perhaps doesn't so much realign the
border with Cardassia as it does define it for the first time
that both sides can agree on. However a lot of colonies
end up on the wrong sides of the new border. Watching this
situation's debut on Deep Space Nine really doesn't leave
this treaty looking like it makes any sense, but add a viewing
of "Journey's End", and it starts to look a little bit
better.
Who's your citizen?
It is important to note what "Journey's End" tells us about this
situation. The Federation's default plan is to evacuate all
its citizens and move them to new homes on their side of the border.
It is unbelievably arrogant in thinking that that is the only
solution, and that it is their business to force this decision
onto the colonists, when there is such an obvious other choice
that each colonist should be open to make. In the end, the
colony on Dorvan Five DOES make that choice, with the peaceable
agreement of Captain Picard of the Federation and Gul Ivec
of the Cardassian Empire. The Dorvan Five colony GIVES UP
ITS FEDERATION CITIZENSHIP in order to stay where it does.
Granted, Picard and Ivec still need to get this agreement
ratified by their respected governments, but in effect,
Dorvan Five is cut loose, no longer aligned with the Federation.
Now we come to the story in "The Maquis", where it seems that
many other colonies have followed suit. Their people have not
been evacuated, they have stayed put in Cardassian Space. So how
is it that Admiral Nechayev can come to Deep Space Nine,
get in Sisko's face, and insist on emphasizing, twice, that
all these people are still citizens of the Federation?
They don't live in the Federation anymore. They are either
Cardassian citizens if the Cardassian Empire will have them,
or squatters in Cardassian space. Perhaps they
can now claim, legitimately, to be independent societies.
Not only do Nechayev and Starfleet and their chain of command
have no business trying to boss them around, but the Prime Directive
now applies as well.
If the colonies want to declare war on Cardassia,
that's totally up to them. Starfleet is limited to policing
Federation sympathizers from selling them arms, or offering to help
them negotiate their differences with the Cardassians,
which requires a much more open and understanding stance from them.
All this makes the original border treaty kind of useless,
because there is still fighting and there is still negotiating.
The voices of these colonies needed to be taken into better
account back then, and the issues that create conflict in the
first place won't simply vanish because the name of peace
comes up. Issues need to be dealt with.
So this story, while having its good moments, turns out to be
two episodes of much exposition of this weird situation without
really coming up with an engaging conflict that makes me want
to root for the Starfleet characters. The political and
moral arguments are really falling flat and failing to see
the obvious.
Where the story has potential is in investigating the mysteries
of who's supplying arms to whom, and what the agenda of the
Cardassian high command really is. Our Starfleet crew is well
within their rights to prosecute the Maquis for bringing their war
into Federation space, or target Federation sympathizers who
smuggle arms or equipment to them.
In terms of morals and philosophies, perhaps the many characters
need to learn to not judge citizens by their external appearances
or biological heritage - just because someone is Human doesn't
mean they are automatically a Federation citizen, in the same way
that just because someone is obviously of Cardassian descent, it
doesn't automatically make them part of the Cardassian Empire.
The situation here still produces many great story possibilities.
But the possibilities that were pursued
in this two-part adventure were not pursued particularly well.
The Collaborator
(Star Trek - Deep Space Nine episode production code 444)
story by Gary Holland
teleplay by Gary Holland & Ira Steven Behr & Robert Hewitt Wolfe
This episode sees Vedek Winn trying her best to tempt Sisko
into violating the Prime Directive to help her political
struggles on Bajor. Nice to see Sisko sidestep that trap
so gracefully.
Does Chief O'Brien fare as well when he helps Kira
and Odo piece the evidence together that will decide
Bajor's religious leadership? Hard to say.
In any case, this episode is a bit of a bummer,
since corruption wins out over truth. I can't say I'm
all that fond of Bareil's choices, holding the past sacred
while saying to hell with the present (and possibly the future).
He may be the better man for the job, thanks to his rival
being as spiritual as nails scraping across a chalkboard,
but he's not too bright by any stretch. A lot of DS9 episodes
this season seem to have great potential, but no real point
to them. Star Trek was losing its essence here.
Thankfully, things returned to much better form for the season two
finale, which launched into a really good third season.....
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